tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-945783876327380823.post1232866749833603647..comments2024-03-28T03:19:00.918-04:00Comments on The Butler and Bagman Chronicles: Poetry Jam - SwimmingBagman and Butlerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06760203276065466927noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-945783876327380823.post-15480393305684399072011-06-08T18:04:15.263-04:002011-06-08T18:04:15.263-04:00This is great. I've often wondered what I woul...This is great. I've often wondered what I would do if something ever happened to Mike. I fear I wouldn't dive high OR low - I'll just sit on the shore & watch the show.The Bughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07509037206264761261noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-945783876327380823.post-44585662178439005972011-06-08T10:42:21.911-04:002011-06-08T10:42:21.911-04:00Bravo for taking the plunge into shark infested wa...Bravo for taking the plunge into shark infested waters! I would like to have a bit of that gravity-free chocolate though!Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-945783876327380823.post-70390597931892877112011-06-07T02:22:59.623-04:002011-06-07T02:22:59.623-04:00The metaphor works very well all the way though. D...The metaphor works very well all the way though. Delightful.Peter Gouldinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13292063172122249202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-945783876327380823.post-88123225300911079232011-06-06T19:48:23.727-04:002011-06-06T19:48:23.727-04:00That's stunning. Stunning.That's stunning. Stunning.Titushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16380213493011623153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-945783876327380823.post-65950791929898140122011-06-06T15:35:02.269-04:002011-06-06T15:35:02.269-04:00Grass and gravity-free chocolate - not better on t...Grass and gravity-free chocolate - not better on the other side, best to fold the chute. Love this 'found' poem.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-945783876327380823.post-23988256022115695282011-06-06T12:22:28.956-04:002011-06-06T12:22:28.956-04:00At least the appetites of sharks are honest - kill...At least the appetites of sharks are honest - killer lineEmerging Writerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06539530495238043923noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-945783876327380823.post-87767391789036894702011-06-06T12:04:51.679-04:002011-06-06T12:04:51.679-04:00I like your analogies - very clever.I like your analogies - very clever.jabbloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12176958811589489979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-945783876327380823.post-25942027345972393022011-06-06T12:01:02.652-04:002011-06-06T12:01:02.652-04:00I love this, Mark. How true. And so full of fabulo...I love this, Mark. How true. And so full of fabulous images - the gravity-free chocolate! Bravo for taking the plunge!NanUhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11596765792663269178noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-945783876327380823.post-77218452884473498672011-06-06T12:00:53.631-04:002011-06-06T12:00:53.631-04:00this is a gorgeous write...and love how you blende...this is a gorgeous write...and love how you blended diving with relationships...and esp when the oxygen runs out to sing with the whales...very nice...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com